this is how much i got so far SO BYE!!
Tuesday, May 26, 2020
Returning to school writing
Hello everyone today i am going to share my writing about returning to school it is my first draft i feel happy to be back at school to see my lovely teacher and my friends and my writing is about how i was feeling going back to school so here is my writing i hope you like it and tell me what i should do to improve my writing.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello Rableen.
ReplyDeleteI think there were a few children who would also be feeling nervous about coming back to school.
What have you been doing at school that you enjoy?.I have been playing games with children.😀
Hello Rableen.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.
Hi Rableen I like your girls name. Next time you should use fullstops and capital letters.
ReplyDeleteThank you Lily
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