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Monday, May 4, 2020

The mouses story.


1 comment:

  1. He was a pretty clever mouse wasn't he. I liked the part where you added his parents in to pull him up again. Let's work on adding full stops in to your writing. This will help your reader to better understand your writing. Keep a look out for a video I will make for you!

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