hello readers I writed a story it is a robbery story here it is hope you like it
Dark purple- describing word
Cyan-myself
Blue-i know
Light pink-the
One day I went to the dairy to buy some gum but I noticed a suspicious car with two people. One was wearing a cyan hoodie and he had big purple lips. The other one had an orange skemask with a grey sweater with little puffy lips.
They went out of the car and started to walk to the shop but the one with the cyan jacket had a dark black bag and the other one had a gun. The cemras were on but there where no one was looking at the ceamras the man with the gun pointed it at the shopkeeper. The man with the cyan jacket put the dark black bag on the counter and stepped backed and then he pointed one hand up and the other hand sideways and kept switching over to the other hand
the shopkeeper looked at the bag and then looked at the boys the the man with the cyan jacket jumed onto the shelf fell off then hit his head on the counter then fell to the ground with his tongue on the floor and then his partner looked at him his partner pointed the gun closer to his face and the man's eyes started to shake and look everywhere.
Hello Rableen.
ReplyDeleteYou have done a good job at staring your recount.I can't read the rest as it goes across the page which has made it hard for me to read.Is there any chance you could fix it up so it goes down the page?.
What does the word cyan mean?.
You have it highlighted as myself but then you have written ' I was wearing a cyan jacket'.
Does that mean you are wearing yourself?.