Hello readers,
On Friday i went to Sumner beach to surf it was one of my favourites because my parents would never let me go on in the sea really far but 4 lifeguards where with us we started of by going in a bus that we arrived and had morning tea we played on the sand and climbed some really but rocks after it was lunch time so we took of our mufti cloths and we where in our swim suit we had fish and chips for lunch but i just ate some chips and a hot dog cause everyone else took all the fish but after we ate we got into our wet suit it was very hard to get it on but when we did we chose witch board to go on me and Marliegh went on the boggy board and it was so fun me and Marliegh where jumping over big waves and it was so fun.
My favourite part of your writing Rableen was the bit about you being able to venture further than you've been.
ReplyDeleteWe are so lucky to have life guards around to help keep us safe.
I remember going into the sea with my brother and cousin.They both made sure I was safe even though my feet couldn't touch the sand.
Maybe next time you could add some punctuation to your work.
If I was reading this aloud, I would of run out of breath as there was nothing there,to tell me to stop.