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Wednesday, August 26, 2020

The Forest-Rableen

Hello readers today i will show you my writing the first thing we did was we got a picture on unsplash after we took a photo and put in remove.bg when my photo was done i put it on a google drawing and my photo was a forest the next thing we did was we wrote our story so it matched our picture here is my story i feel amazing about it so hope you like it bye see you in my next post.

 The Forest-show don't tell

One day i went to the forest to find some apple trees so I could eat some apples i was kind of scared because it was my first time going to the forest.  Then i heard a Grr and i didn't know what it was so i started running and a fox was chasing me. Then I found  a little hut and jumped in and locked the door but after some time the fox was gone and when i came out the forest looked scary cause all the trees were black and there were dark green leaves on the ground.I was very scared so i started walking and i didn't know where i was going and i got lost.after some time of walking i got tired and got some food that i found in the hut i eat some cookies and after i started walking again i found another hut so i went inside and found a jacket and wearied
it. While was walking it started raining but luckily i had a jacket but then the same fox came and started chasing me the fox bite my jacket and the jacket came of but i didn't care i hided behind a tree and climbed up i stayed there till the fox was gone i fell asleep on the tree and the fox was gone i woke up and climbed down the tree i was really wet since it was raining i started walking again trying to get out of the forest but i saw no light everything was dark. I kept walking trying to get out but I could not get out for some reason. I was stuck in the forest forever.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Rableen I like your picture. See you later bye.

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  2. Hello Rableen i real like your picture good look on your face

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