This is a story I wrote after I watched the music video So Good To Me. I chose this video because the music was nice. I hope you enjoy my story.
One day there was a girl in her house. She was jumping and running to go to her big garden.
But when she got there her pet giraffe was gone. She looked behind the trees and bushes. She sat
on a rock with a stick and went to the swing and sat sadly.
on a rock with a stick and went to the swing and sat sadly.
She made posters and asked people if they had seen her pet giraffe. She stuck some posters on
the tree. But no one found her pet.
the tree. But no one found her pet.
She went to the playground and looked there. She had lots of hope and found her pet giraffe.
They played hide and seek. Later they both went home together.
Hello Rableen. I thought the music was good too. You did a good job writing in sentences. Maybe next time you could add in some good describing words to help the reader build a good idea of the story.
ReplyDeleteGood morning Mr Marten. Thank you so much commenting on my blog and i think i should have put some describing words.
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